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Sep 17, 2011
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APOCALYPSE
APOCALYPSE
a sudden madness seized Mankind
the sane scattered in fear for theiir mind
Insanity in violent pursuit
and the gates of Heaven swung open
floodiing the skies thunderous red
a procession of angels
black wings spread
followed lines of marching dead
singing in Excelso Deo
and across the universe
laughter was heard again
About This Poem
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Geremia
13 years 9 months ago
Yes. Then I succeeded in
Yes. Then I succeeded in relating the image. :
joe
Geremia
13 years 9 months ago
If there is Good, there is
If there is Good, there is Evil. One term defines the other.
Thank you, Rosinella.
Hooded Stranger
13 years 9 months ago
Joe
Joe,
you know I like this one and it is that last line I enjoy the most...who's laughter? Good or evil?
regards,
HS
Geremia
13 years 9 months ago
Dan
Who laughed? "And then the gates of Heaven swung open...."