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Dec 14, 2025
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Apple
red
it holds a soft spot
on one side.
I wonder if
that is when
it slipped from
someone's hand,
or fell from its tree.
imperfect, it is,
yet, still so sweet.
About This Poem
Last Few Words: Injuries or afflictions, no matter how obtained, do not need to define us.
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Geezer
4 months 1 week ago
After living...
for more than seventy-five years, I am not surprised to find that often times, there is a certain sweetness to some of those with life's biggest scars and carry sweet spots with a certain grace to them. Truer words were never spoken. ~ Geez.
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Lavender
4 months 1 week ago
Hello, Geezer,
I know many people like that, too!
Thank you for your thoughts!
L
Unca Fez
4 months 1 week ago
I Agree
Oft times, it is the sum of the scars and bruises that so endears people to us. A nice way to remind us of that.
Steve
Lavender
4 months 1 week ago
Hello, Steve,
Absolutely!
Thank you for reading! Best wishes to you and Cat for a peaceful (and warm) holiday season!
Lx