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Sep 26, 2022
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ARCHIVES KISS MY LOVE
First kiss
lips are divine
they are fine
but none on earth
can sweet lips
of my kind
ever find
I wear no mask
(pre COVID)
for I love my task
just kiss me
like a fairy' don't ask
see
how nectar flows
from lips to lips
it just like Niagara
goes
this kiss was lovely
didn’t you feel it
glamorous...
naaaaa
a then 2010
new be Neo’s kiss
absolutely free
no one took it
no2.
is an add on comment
none glossed it yet
since a year lapsed
still I so present
as I wash out old linen
let me squeeze it
once again
smack !
About This Poem
Last Few Words: FROM THE ICU NOW KISS ME WILL YOU SEE YOU
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Lavender
2 years 9 months ago
Archives Kiss My Love
Hello, Lovedly,
Sweet poetry for certain, but you are in the ICU? Behave yourself and feel better soon!
L
lovedly
2 years 9 months ago
no I am not in ICU
That was imagery
years ago to elicit comments of poets NEO
LOL
Thanks I am living
silently
Lavender
2 years 9 months ago
Wonderful...
...glad to hear that you are well!
L
lovedly
2 years 9 months ago
Lav
did I say that
last days to rest
a long journey in heaven
wingless
I'd hate to leave NEO bereft
they have asked us to CONTEST
Neos anthro .......
what Lav