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ARCHIVES KISS MY LOVE

First kiss
lips are divine
they are fine
but none on earth
can sweet lips
of my kind
ever find

I wear no mask
(pre COVID)
for I love my task
just kiss me
like a fairy' don't ask
see
how nectar flows
from lips to lips
it just like Niagara
goes

this kiss was lovely
didn’t you feel it
glamorous...
naaaaa

a then 2010
new be Neo’s kiss
absolutely free
no one took it

no2.
is an add on comment

none glossed it yet
since a year lapsed

still I so present
as I wash out old linen
let me squeeze it
once again
smack !

About This Poem

Last Few Words: FROM THE ICU NOW KISS ME WILL YOU SEE YOU

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: UNIVERSE...ETERNITY C/O ME, ROU

Favorite Poets: All across the Internet whom I read , and they inspire..

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Comments

Lavender

Lavender

2 years 9 months ago

Archives Kiss My Love

Hello, Lovedly,
Sweet poetry for certain, but you are in the ICU? Behave yourself and feel better soon!
L

lovedly

lovedly

2 years 9 months ago

no I am not in ICU

That was imagery
years ago to elicit comments of poets NEO

LOL
Thanks I am living
silently

lovedly

lovedly

2 years 9 months ago

Lav

did I say that
last days to rest
a long journey in heaven
wingless
I'd hate to leave NEO bereft

they have asked us to CONTEST
Neos anthro .......
what Lav