Are you He/She

One who doesn't sin lives honorably

also shares knowledge with all human

donates all excess wealth amongst needy

He/She will be the next one from Heaven

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: UNIVERSE...ETERNITY C/O ME, ROU

Favorite Poets: All across the Internet whom I read , and they inspire..

Comments

Sparrow 42

5 years 8 months ago

Loved

This needs a good edit there seems to be some words missing as it doesn't flow.
The odd capital letter K but please sort it as it is not up to your usual writes,
Yours Ian ..

lovedly

5 years 8 months ago

ANY better

Ian now are you in Q

Sparrow 42

5 years 8 months ago

Loved

(st needy) just a missed couple of letters that you will find on your Key board lol
Take care know I is watching lol
Yours, Ian ..

lovedly

5 years 8 months ago

amongst

amongst
not accepted by compy says
among-st
OR
among
lol keep watching
till I
rflol

so FINALLY AM USING
SEE

Sparrow 42

5 years 8 months ago

Loved

I c u is a mused does this mean you will write better in the future with their help..
Take care, Yours, Yenti

lovedly

5 years 8 months ago

a mused

OR
amused

which Ian
u rn't hoppy
ICU