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Arguing

with you,
feels worth it.

I love arguing with you.
I've dreamt of these moments.
Written about them.
Of having someone carve out a space
in my heart,
that I wanted to nurture,to fight for,to cry for,to bleed for.

Now, I want to take your name.

I want to brand myself, as yours.

The pain,the hope.

I'm drowning in all this. Messy. Clumsy.Awkward. Beautiful ---Love.

Where did you come from?
Did,my Higher Power make you just for me?

I LOVE YOU.

you're a key-chain I keep within my heart.

My Key. My Chain.

My compass. My cliché morning rain.

I want to give you a baby.

I'm yours.

About This Poem

Last Few Words: Verrrrry rough draft. I'm getting married, I'm working on my vows. All help and criticism welcome.

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Country/Region: ZAF

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Comments

Geezer

Geezer

6 months ago

Congratulations...

on your upcoming marriage! I don't know how I would improve on what you've written so far, it reads like poetry! Good enough for me. ~ Geez.
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kowque

kowque

6 months ago

:)

Sorry, I'm trying to be a doomed poet but I'm drowning in so much love right now it's hard to be morose :)

Thank you for the kind words!

Lavender

Lavender

6 months ago

Arguing

Hello, Koki!
Wow, wedding vows! How wonderful! This must be very personal for you, for certain. Only you know how this feels.
Congratulations!
L