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Arguing
with you,
feels worth it.
I love arguing with you.
I've dreamt of these moments.
Written about them.
Of having someone carve out a space
in my heart,
that I wanted to nurture,to fight for,to cry for,to bleed for.
Now, I want to take your name.
I want to brand myself, as yours.
The pain,the hope.
I'm drowning in all this. Messy. Clumsy.Awkward. Beautiful ---Love.
Where did you come from?
Did,my Higher Power make you just for me?
I LOVE YOU.
you're a key-chain I keep within my heart.
My Key. My Chain.
My compass. My cliché morning rain.
I want to give you a baby.
I'm yours.
About This Poem
Last Few Words: Verrrrry rough draft. I'm getting married, I'm working on my vows. All help and criticism welcome.
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
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neopoet
6 months ago
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Geezer
6 months ago
Congratulations...
on your upcoming marriage! I don't know how I would improve on what you've written so far, it reads like poetry! Good enough for me. ~ Geez.
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kowque
6 months ago
:)
Sorry, I'm trying to be a doomed poet but I'm drowning in so much love right now it's hard to be morose :)
Thank you for the kind words!
Lavender
6 months ago
Arguing
Hello, Koki!
Wow, wedding vows! How wonderful! This must be very personal for you, for certain. Only you know how this feels.
Congratulations!
L
kowque
6 months ago
Purple princess
Thank you for stopping by ;)