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The art of forgetting.
Never forget those, furnace blown
in the black mills of war
Some may forget the poets, and
all that came before
But I can't ignore the mystery,
and sup at the ornate cup for more
Like a ritual libation, burning through-
you continually regret, yet relish
Its singular pleasures and the
sublime shock that gets
You every time you read Thomas,
as a sunrise, mirrors sunset
The world may forget the poets,
As in its dark folds falls
But look at the Velvel history, of
Larkin, laboring in his halls
To bring us slices of unique humanity,
Where all were surely aimed
Square at our hearts and guts, and through
the echoing caverns of our brains
They may forget the poets, but I feel Hardy now,
As though the fog bell breath of morning,
was ushered in, and his pen just fell.
About This Poem
Last Few Words: Loose - in progress..
Style/Type: Structured: Western
Editing Stage: Editing - draft
Comments
Seren
9 years 4 months ago
Applause
Applause
brilliant poem nothing else I can say to this beauty
except I wish I had written it
cheers Jayne
vandiemenspeak
9 years 4 months ago
Thanks Jane :)
Glad you enjoyed. Reading your profile, and given how long you've been writing, this means a lot - thank you! I shall endeavor to read some of your poems.
Thanks,
Chris.
Geezer
9 years 4 months ago
No constructive critique...
Just a few loud claps to let you know that it was appreciated. I did wonder though, if you meant sips instead of sups? Libation makes one think of something to drink, rather than eat. ~ Geezer.
vandiemenspeak
9 years 4 months ago
Thanks Geezer,sip, sup, errr..
I'm gonna be up all night thinking about that one now! I think in the north of England, from whence I came - we used sup, as in drink, I not the dictionary definition notes "Northern" England:
sup
verbNORTHERN ENGLISHdated
1.
take (drink or liquid food) by sips or spoonfuls.
"she supped up her soup delightedly"
So up t'north she'd be acceptable lad :) - I still might change it though. Thanks, glad you enjoyed.
Chris.