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The Art Thief

He met the smile
of Mona Lisa

although elusive,
there was no doubt

she had him at hello

About This Poem

Last Few Words: Seduced.

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Country/Region: United States

Favorite Poets: I tend to read Ted Kooser, Jim Harrison, Billy Collins, Paul Simon, Robert Frost. I like minimalist poetry, and poems reflecting on nature and Mother Earth.

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Lavender

Lavender

2 weeks 2 days ago

Hello, Michael,

This was a bit of fun.  Originally started as a casual lover of art looking at the beauty - but somehow, he went too far!  :)

Thank you so much!

L

Candlewitch

Candlewitch

2 weeks 2 days ago

Brilliant...

I think they ought to add your poem to the end of the film! I loved it!

and you, too! Cat xxx

Geezer

Geezer

2 weeks 2 days ago

I felt...

that the brevity added to the story. All said in a nutshell; I got the feel of the whole scenario, with just these few lines. ~ Geez.

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Lavender

Lavender

2 weeks 2 days ago

Hello, Geezer,

Studying images of the Mona Lisa, the poem just kinda wrote itself.

Thank you, as always!

L