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Jun 06, 2025
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The Art Thief
He met the smile
of Mona Lisa
although elusive,
there was no doubt
she had him at hello
About This Poem
Last Few Words: Seduced.
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Michael Anthony
2 weeks 3 days ago
You know I love brevity L,…
You know I love brevity L, so this is one of my favorites - good stuff and well done!
Best
Michael Anthony
2 weeks 3 days ago
And the title is brilliant…
And the title is brilliant!
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Lavender
2 weeks 2 days ago
Hello, Michael,
This was a bit of fun. Originally started as a casual lover of art looking at the beauty - but somehow, he went too far! :)
Thank you so much!
L
Candlewitch
2 weeks 2 days ago
Brilliant...
I think they ought to add your poem to the end of the film! I loved it!
and you, too! Cat xxx
Lavender
2 weeks 2 days ago
Hello, Cat,
You are too kind! Much love to you!
Lx
Geezer
2 weeks 2 days ago
I felt...
that the brevity added to the story. All said in a nutshell; I got the feel of the whole scenario, with just these few lines. ~ Geez.
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Lavender
2 weeks 2 days ago
Hello, Geezer,
Studying images of the Mona Lisa, the poem just kinda wrote itself.
Thank you, as always!
L