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May 07, 2020
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The Artist
Like molten lava the passion of creativity
through the soul of the artist flows
The sweet sultry tones
stoke the fire
illuminating his eyes
which see the world as something new
Filled with beauty and mystery
in every brush stroke
the simplicity of the man
belies the complexity of his hand
About This Poem
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Geezer
5 years 2 months ago
I like this...
How about saying: Seeing the world anew each day?
~ Gee.
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c lynn brooks
5 years 2 months ago
Gee
thanks for the read
I like the short sound of that line
but I thank you for your suggestion
c lynn brooks
5 years 2 months ago
teddy
Thank you reading .I did use your suggestions
lovedly
5 years 2 months ago
passion is common to man and woman
1.illuminating ''his'' eyes
2.the simplicity of the ''man''
belies the complexity of ''his'' hand
you may like to reconsider
1.one's eyes
2.you may like here
to apply a poet's mind
c lynn brooks
5 years 2 months ago
lovedly
thank you for reading. why the quotation marks
c lynn brooks
5 years 2 months ago
Mark
Thank you. I don 't think anyone can answer that question guess it depends on what one believes