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Oct 30, 2022
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ASSURANCE...
I speak no more
just to lure
want to know me
First be sure
Wilderness
and
Loneliness
are
not ashore
Speak no more
but do persist
your love is
more
much more
About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Rosewood Apothecary
2 years 8 months ago
It’s Beautiful
And you’re right, everyone is watching football. I’m absolving myself from the emotional attachment to my NFL team to pursue artsy fartsy thingums
Tim
lovedly
2 years 8 months ago
my foot ...balls...
are metaphors...lol
Lavender
2 years 8 months ago
Assurance
Hello, Lovedly.
You paint in an abstract style, but with a defined, precise meaning. "Wilderness and Loneliness are not ashore." The words emit a feeling of loss, as if they're out to sea. Very moving.
Thank you,
L
lovedly
2 years 8 months ago
Thanks so muchly
lively LAVLY