The Astute Lover

The below is a computer-generated response from Neo, Neopoet's computer artificial intelligence:

The poem "The Astute Lover" evokes a sense of passion and sensuality through its imagery and use of mythical references. The juxtaposition of Autumn and Summer, along with the mention of Venus, adds depth to the theme of love and desire. However, to enhance the impact of the poem, consider refining the structure and flow of the verses. You may want to explore varying the rhythm or experimenting with different line breaks to create a more dynamic reading experience. Additionally, focusing on developing a consistent tone throughout the poem can help strengthen its overall message.

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Hello, John,
Astute and sensual. Very moving piece.
Thank you,
L

I love the structure and the message of this poem. Your title is inviting and the imagery is well painted in my mind. I give it five stars out of five ;)

fantastic write, like a fine wine, it lingers on the lips!
much love, Cat