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Nov 19, 2014
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Aural Lotion
sweet nothings
after-glowing
glide
tenderly
mingling
love's sheen
like liquid starlight
dripping
fragrant
kisses
lingering
mid-air
fading
slowly
reluctantly
into sleepy
invisible
silence
About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - polished draft
Comments
eightmenout
10 years 8 months ago
Al
Love it. Simple. Flows very well. Language is strong.
Thanks,
brittle light
10 years 8 months ago
Scott
you've touched on all the facets I was concerned with.
thanks
Rula
10 years 8 months ago
Agree with scott
and it gives me a smile.
brittle light
10 years 8 months ago
thank you so much
thank you so much
I appreciate your response...It gives me a smile