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Nov 19, 2014
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Aural Lotion
sweet nothings
after-glowing
glide
tenderly
mingling
love's sheen
like liquid starlight
dripping
fragrant
kisses
lingering
mid-air
fading
slowly
reluctantly
into sleepy
invisible
silence
About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - polished draft
Comments
eightmenout
10 years 11 months ago
Al
Love it. Simple. Flows very well. Language is strong.
Thanks,
brittle light
10 years 11 months ago
Scott
you've touched on all the facets I was concerned with.
thanks
Rula
10 years 11 months ago
Agree with scott
and it gives me a smile.
brittle light
10 years 11 months ago
thank you so much
thank you so much
I appreciate your response...It gives me a smile