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Feb 01, 2024
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Austin Schowe
Today, I saw boy that looked just like you.
At least how I remember you...
Light brown hair.
Short, straight, spiky...
He had your style
and your smile,
and he smiled at me.
I smiled back politely
but my heart sank
because he wasn't you.
I sat in the parking lot
a few extra seconds
to see him once more.
I know I'll never see him again
just like I'll never see you again.
About This Poem
Last Few Words: I miss you, my dear friend.
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - draft
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