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Nov 25, 2019
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Autumn’s Lovelier Nights (CONTINUUM)
A continuum poem
These are leaves
which surround me
in my back yard
as autumn advances
adventurers
the night is always young
as I peep
through my window daily
all passers by smile at me
are you composing poetry
delightfully
the night makes me dream
of the morn yet to be born
ere arrives another fresh dawn
another autumn is newly sworn
ages since
to ages hence
so within my hearth stay warm
till autumn has once again
come and gone
ere the sun returns home
to the North
till then enjoy me
and
my autumn
Autumn’s Lovelier Nights (The continuum one)
About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - draft
Comments
Geezer
5 years 7 months ago
I like this...
a little bit of rhyme, just enough to make it smooth. ~ Gee.
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lovedly
5 years 7 months ago
Thanks Gee
SHALL REDO
Geezer
5 years 7 months ago
Why?...
I don't see a need to redo this.
lovedly
5 years 7 months ago
thanks no change just misunderstood Gee rgds
a little bit of rhyme, just enough to make it smooth. ~ Gee.