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AUTUMN POEMS

Autumn leaf

Be not alone
all are lonely

somewhere in the vastness of eternity
someone calls out instantly
still we say wait
time hasn't come yet
then loneliness vanishes

unknown comes in one’s dreams
screams
where have you been
one says
are you now asking
an autumn leaf

the invisible one smiles alongside
now 'tis autumn
there is no surprise

hope you too will be
some day
flying about
side beside

Foolhardy Lovers

They all fall in love
on Face Book
or any sites
all those who so appear
are not themselves in reality

few are like humming birds
some chasing living ghosts
many are mad in their musings
thinking them to be shadows

Who and Why

should they just fall in love
with creatures so strange
they will never meet ever
I say again and again

love abounds in hearts two
if one is known
another is new
but both should feel the urge
a desire to fall in love
with just someone’s ink
in liquid or a magnificent form
whatever they may think

Love Between Srangers
is maddening
isn't it midday imaging
often all keep wondering

as do these autumn leaves
all like human bees

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: UNIVERSE...ETERNITY C/O ME, ROU

Favorite Poets: All across the Internet whom I read , and they inspire..

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Comments

Geezer

Geezer

3 years ago

human bees...

indeed! We pollinate wherever and whenever the chance grows. Like setting on a blossom, listening to the hum of wings and probiscus drinking the nectar. Summern passes way too quickly and the clothing of the trees, falls to the ground and hides the grass. Let the leaves leave well enough alone.~ Geez.
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lovedly

lovedly

3 years ago

GEEEZZZZZZZZZZ

It seems you liked it...
Tomorrow I shall post another
woman comparison with an AUTUMN TREE
WOW TIS it

Geezer

Geezer

3 years ago

I did...

enjoy it! I await with baited breath, the next installment. ~ Geez.
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L

Lord Barham

3 years ago

Lovedly poem!

Beautiful, free flowing poem. I only have one objection. It is the line "they will never meet ever". My first impression is that the ever is unnecessary and redundant. My second impression is a lunatic one! They will never meet Ever, as though Ever becomes a personification of indefinite time. Now I can't make up my mind if I like this line or not. So, feel free to completely ignore this advice!