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Oct 16, 2021
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The Autumnal fever
Wow,Autumn once again is here
what a lovely season
for all poets so dear
what a beautiful fall
you relay
here it’s raining,
then a bit cloudy
sunnier later
during day
the clouds show anger
but quietly pass away
wonderful trees
leaves,
so colorfully display
my what hues
I wish I could show you
wait
I’ll fetch my camera
for you
About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
scribbler
3 years 9 months ago
yep
autumn is by my reckoning the most beautiful time of year. Nice poem
lovedly
3 years 9 months ago
THANKS STAN
But this time
winter entered first
sun forgot to come
so autumn was banged
thank urself not hanged
it's coming in
off and on with a bang
leaves must switch
lol
Geezer
3 years 9 months ago
As disjointed...
as your work is this time, I still see the beauty. ~ Gee.
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lovedly
3 years 9 months ago
as u feel
dis joint me
GEE
lovedly
3 years 8 months ago
no comment
Geeeeeeeeeeeeeee
Geezer
3 years 8 months ago
I felt...
the sharp, cool breeze and smelled the damp air, while my eyes saw the colors that rival the rainbow! ~ Geez.
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lovedly
3 years 8 months ago
thanks
Gee