Autumns and Winters of Life

79 Autumns I have seen
in a life that cannot be forgotten

54 Winters We have seen
since attachment as destined .

How many more autumnal poetry
I shall compose
can anyone now suppose

Many chills we have to bear
winter here kills

so we trot away to another sanctuary
migrate as birds
see you next summer
be patient please .

now going for a morning walk
wait kindly

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: UNIVERSE...ETERNITY C/O ME, ROU

Favorite Poets: All across the Internet whom I read , and they inspire..

Comments

Geezer

5 years 8 months ago

You left me...

with a little mystery and I just had to try and figure out; why the discrepancy between the amount of Autumns and winters that you have seen? I'm counting twenty-five. I am guessing that you have spent twenty-five years in some warm and balmy place, waiting for your winter to be gone, before you return to the temperate climate. ~ Geezer.
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lovedly

5 years 8 months ago

Gee mark the difference I..79 AND ''WE'' ..54 RIDDLE EH

79 Autumns I have seen
in a life that cannot be forgotten

54 Winters We have seen
since attachment as destined
Now decipher

Geezer

5 years 8 months ago

In a relationship...

for twenty-five years? You got me baffled.

lovedly

5 years 8 months ago

one more try Gee

married 54
can't believe it j
ust try will ye

Sparrow 42

5 years 8 months ago

Loved Or Lovedone or even lovedly

You is a Canadian goose, that flies south for the Winter, probably one of those, judging by your travels goes South of the equator for Winter.
.25 years of missing Winter send me some tickets please lol
Have a lovely summer again young Bard,
Yours Ian ..