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Nov 26, 2022
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Autumn's golden leaves miss me
Autumn golden leaves miss me
every time I chilled
in November.....
time's old age said ----
turn over...
came to a place
fairly warmer
you enjoy your golden
autumn leaves
turn over
knock knock
friends are
now over
feel warmer
dinner or whatever....
About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Geezer
2 years 7 months ago
I do believe...
that I would classify this as a stream of thought piece. All good, although I am curious as to if the [turnover] rather than
turn over, is in regard to a pastry instead of the same turn over motion? Glad you had friends come over, [for dinner]?
Happy Holidays ~ Geez.
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lovedly
2 years 7 months ago
thanks Gee
re look will ye
Geezer
2 years 7 months ago
Too bad...
that it wasn't a turnover! I love hot turnovers from the oven and a nice cup of coffee or tea! LoL~ Geez.
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Rosewood Apothecary
2 years 7 months ago
Timbre
You have a uniqueness that I can only describe as timbre. Nobody sounds like you even if they say the same thing. It’s something in music. Sax and trumpet can play the exact same note and yet sound totally different.
Love it
Tim
lovedly
2 years 7 months ago
ROSE YOU ARE WOOD
Iam a kid of JUPITER the thesaurus lies in me down under
have you seen Wow say now ere i dive deep
Rosy be ye
t cee