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AWAITING AUTUMN
All is still and summer green
(far too hot for most to stir)
Wild life is hidden by leaves' screen
Insect calls are a quiet purr.
In midst of season all still grows
fawns, squirrel kits and even plants.
The living forest rests, it knows,
that soon will come the harvest dance.
Anticipation slowly builds
as August quietly rolls around.
Crops putting on their final yield
sustenance from warm dry ground.
Even the wind now holds still
hounds barely glance at a stray hare.
Birds sing with a muted trill.
Lazy bees hum in the air.
It seems the poplars can not wait.
They have a couple leaves of gold
as they strive to meet their fate
when autumn turns their fellows bold.
About This Poem
Style/Type: Structured: Western
Review Request Direction:
What did you think of my title?
How was my language use?
What did you think of the rhythm or pattern or pacing?
How does this theme appeal to you?
How was the beginning/ending of the poem?
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
scribbler
14 years ago
Hi Rose
In midst of season all yet grows : fawns, squirrel kits(baby squirrels) and even plants. See if that clarifies meaning. Sometime typos swarm around my index finger and have to be shooed off by others lol. Thanks for taking time to come by and do the shooing.........stan
scribbler
14 years ago
hi Rose
It's kind of funny how many different names there are for young animals. Should not expect folks to know as many as I might......stan
scribbler
13 years 12 months ago
Hey Rose
Just put me in a big city and try to give me directions via a subway and see who gets lost lol. We are all most comfortable in familiar surroundings ............stan
Gracy
4 years 11 months ago
Hi Stan, I love your poem,
Hi Stan, I love your poem, everything about it. The title, the content and the rhyming. To think here in the S.H. we've hardly finished Winter. It's still snowing!
Your imagery is fantastic, I feel your poetry. Will return, 'tis late. All the best.
scribbler
4 years 11 months ago
Hi Gracy
The highs her are still in the nineties (F) so I can't hardly wait for the next 6 weeks to pass and cooler temps to arrive. Thanks for the visit