Awakening

I never realized he was
till he was
but only when he wasn't

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Last Few Words: Taste my new concept of briefery words like haiku 5 3 5

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

Region, Country: UNIVERSE...ETERNITY C/O ME, ROU

Favorite Poets: All across the Internet whom I read , and they inspire..

6 years 5 months ago

Still trying to digest this one. ~ Geezer.
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6 years 5 months ago

sum total

''one realises the value of some one
once that ''some one'' is absent
or no more
my newer briefer version
of conveyance
in fewer words

6 years 5 months ago

This is abs IMAGERY
Do try and read my poem on a girls passing by
she said meet you on the other side

''NO OTHER SIDE''