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Dec 19, 2018
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Away From You!
My coffee?
I got it as cold
As the early morning breeze.
How I never realized
That your breath adds
The warmth to every
life detail!
About This Poem
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
zebra
6 years 7 months ago
A perfect piece to remind me
A perfect piece to remind me you can never fully appreciate the presence and love of another unless your inner formulation includes their potential absence Nice write Rula
Rula
6 years 7 months ago
Thank you
really appreciate your comment and value it highly zebra.
alidzain
6 years 7 months ago
Salam, Rula.
Love this piece.
Khalid
Rula
6 years 7 months ago
Thank you
Khalid... Nice to receive a comment from you bro.
raj
6 years 7 months ago
Says a lot in such few words
Says a lot in such few words Rula...very meaningful about mere presence of someone else adds value to the experience...if I read it right it underscores the value of togetherness...
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Rula
6 years 4 months ago
Hello raj
not sure how I missed your comment here.
Thank you.
miss your presence. Hope all is well.