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Oct 06, 2016
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B L E M I S H
here comes the winter
hold her hand
a pocket door souveneir
pasted to the flaw
white gold
white gold
silver bullets
shoot the moon
remember the
scent that hung
in the room
gnger snaps
and butterscotch
a bandage on a knee
seasons snoozing
the wind is wooring
like fresh graves
carefree
tinned things
needful eyes
watch alert
from the picture
snaps
the bureau
with the sticky drawer
crooked are the limbs
waiting
idling empty
curious thing
the wind
says
neither I
...
About This Poem
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Roscoe Lane
7 years 9 months ago
Read and recorded,
Read and recorded, no critique just letting you know i've read this. Regards Roscoe...
lovedly
7 years 9 months ago
much shorter and sweeter
and I hold my comments
as in last one I read
Dear poet Esker