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Mar 21, 2016
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For Barbara's Eternal Renga WS Bring in the Spring
Sheer excitement
at awakening of spring
on rosy petals
chorus of peepers at eve
and purple finches at dawn
About This Poem
Style/Type: Structured: Eastern
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Barbara Writes
10 years 1 month ago
Wow
You wonderfully quick. I'm still putting it together. I got my first poem
raj
10 years 1 month ago
Thanks for the Wow Barbara,
Thanks for the Wow Barbara,
Hope you liked it for a beginning to the eternal Renga,
Am I in?
Regards,
Barbara Writes
10 years 1 month ago
I love it of course you're in
You get to start it off
alidzain
10 years 1 month ago
here's mine
The days grow longer
in the season of rebirth,
younglings come to life
Spreading warmth marks winter's end
as bears rise from their slumber.
Alid
Barbara Writes
10 years 1 month ago
Thanks alid
I appreciate you springing in. I'm still preparing but glad you're in
lovedly
10 years 1 month ago
wow u do rember raj
I know nothing about renga
at yours I wonder
Barbara Writes
10 years 1 month ago
Hey lovedly
Renga is really simple. Are you familiar with haiku and senyru
Barbara Writes
10 years 1 month ago
Hey lovedly
Renga is really simple. Are you familiar with haiku and senyru
lovedly
10 years 1 month ago
yeps haiku
I do once in a BLEW MOON
oK blue
what else can i do
Barbara Writes
10 years 1 month ago
Haiku
Ok write a haiku about spring then add to couplets at bottom of it and you have tanka poem for the renga. .
Barbara Writes
10 years 1 month ago
Hi raj
Change this in edit to "bring in the spring" workshop. It's presently in collaborative poetry writing workshop
Thanks.