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raj
Mar 21, 2016 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)
This poem is part of the workshop:

Bring in the Spring Eternal Renga

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For Barbara's Eternal Renga WS Bring in the Spring

Sheer excitement
at awakening of spring
on rosy petals

chorus of peepers at eve
and purple finches at dawn

About This Poem

Style/Type: Structured: Eastern

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: Somewhere in the world, IND

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Barbara Writes

Barbara Writes

9 years 3 months ago

Wow

You wonderfully quick. I'm still putting it together. I got my first poem

R

raj

9 years 3 months ago

Thanks for the Wow Barbara,

Thanks for the Wow Barbara,

Hope you liked it for a beginning to the eternal Renga,

Am I in?

Regards,

alidzain

alidzain

9 years 3 months ago

here's mine

The days grow longer
in the season of rebirth,
younglings come to life

Spreading warmth marks winter's end
as bears rise from their slumber.

Alid

lovedly

lovedly

9 years 3 months ago

yeps haiku

I do once in a BLEW MOON

oK blue
what else can i do

Barbara Writes

Barbara Writes

9 years 3 months ago

Haiku

Ok write a haiku about spring then add to couplets at bottom of it and you have tanka poem for the renga. .

Barbara Writes

Barbara Writes

9 years 3 months ago

Hi raj

Change this in edit to "bring in the spring" workshop. It's presently in collaborative poetry writing workshop
Thanks.