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lovedly
lovedly
Feb 22, 2016 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

be that beautiful butterfly )))))menore edit))))))

A beautiful butterfly
has the privilege of entry
to any nectarish orifice

let it be planty
flowery
butter fly
will love to there die
even if it be a candle flame
butterflies love
the burning game
and put all humans
to tearful shame

are you now
at least game
O! what a shame
just hide your name....

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: UNIVERSE...ETERNITY C/O ME, ROU

Favorite Poets: All across the Internet whom I read , and they inspire..

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Sparrow

Sparrow

9 years 4 months ago

Loved

One of my children here calls me Papillon, so I do know of the ways of the butterfly, in one of my pieces I was on the wings of a butterfly, they are the fluttering beauty of think as well as bring an insect.
Henri Charrière, called "Papillon," for the butterfly tattoo on his chest, was convicted in Paris in 1931 of a murder he did not commit. Sent to Devils Island, a good read if you have time..
Good write young one, I will try to be more attentive from now,
Yours, Ian..

lovedly

lovedly

9 years 4 months ago

when butterflies decide

when butterflies decide
to fly from plant to plant
'tis then they only kisses supplant
and a new cocoon emerges
also as stamens and pollen bask
in the sun
a sunflower has just been seeded
O lucky one
we all human are
sons of a gun
fired into an oven