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Oct 02, 2024
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BEACH UNREADY
BEACH UNREADY
Why was I naked when I awoke
Could it be an odd sort of joke
A nudist beach with similar folk
But no, a deserted strip of sand
Memory loss I don’t understand
Before I move, just let me think
I do recall many a rum and coke
And someone there who spoke
I've a tiny towel worn as a cloak
Seeing the parts of me not tanned
Such a display was never planned
A lad’s day out and lots to drink
The cold tide laps, ready to soak
No pocket no wallet, I am broke
Such embarrasment it can evoke
This exposure sure to be banned
Yet hardly covered with my hand
And those I meet may well blink
About This Poem
Style/Type: Structured: Western
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Not actively editing
Comments
Jokerface82
8 months 4 weeks ago
Haha
Made me laugh good luck
Leslie
8 months 4 weeks ago
Twizzle48
I would llike to have been the one in your place! The topic was comical and I enjoyed it alot' I'll have to check out more of your stuff.
Geezer
8 months 3 weeks ago
Another odd...
and complicated rhyme scheme! Yeah, never woke to find myself naked and not know how, but I certainly have awakened in some strange places and circumstances, which were brought to mind. Excellent story. ~ Geez.
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