Depressed 1

Feb 12, 2023 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Beat The Clock

I am getting tired trying to beat the clock

I know soon that it is going to stop

As I get older, it feels like it is going fast

I know that my time it will not last

I look back, and I do not like what I see

All of the things that have made up me

The tragedies, flaws, and falls in my past

Scars are here now and will always last

The trinities of past, future, and now

They concave my reflections somehow

Time is a murderer; it is killing me

It is turning my mind agnostically

Trip over the minutes as the seconds fall

I know it is time for me to go; that is all

About This Poem

Editing Stage: Editing - polished draft

About the Author

Region, Country: Southwest United States, USA

Favorite Poets: Edgar Allen Poe, Jim Morrison, Sylvia Plath

Comments

Depressed 1

2 years 5 months ago

Thanks

Thanks Kat. Fortunately, I have found several outlets for my depression.

Candlewitch

2 years 5 months ago

dear D1

is all that beautifully amazing art work yours??? i'm going back for another look...I once had a 1951 International Harvester fully restored! (Green)

Candlewitch

2 years 5 months ago

dear Depressed1

hang in there, baby! you are a gem. we don't want to lose you!

*hugs, Cat

Depressed 1

2 years 5 months ago

Thanks

Thanks Cat.

Candlewitch

2 years 5 months ago

See Note Above! *hugs, Cat

See Note Above!

*hugs, Cat

Depressed 1

2 years 5 months ago

Thanks

Thanks Cat

Rosewood Apothecary

2 years 5 months ago

Hang in there

You’re a calculated and concise writer. Your style is well developed and you’re delivering on a regular basis.

Keep it up,
Tim

Depressed 1

2 years 5 months ago

Thanks

Thank you Tim. I like to think I can improve more every write.

RoseBlack

2 years 5 months ago

Hold on

You are an incredibly strong writer with powerful and emotional pieces. I am glad you are still with us sharing.

Depressed 1

2 years 5 months ago

Thanks

Thanks RoseBlack. It gets difficult but I hang in.