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Aug 15, 2011
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~beatification
before me, there were trees
rocks and rain
and stars
with the passing of time
I have learned
to tie my days with the red thread
of sunrise
to dip my fingers in spring-cold water
of wisdom
to watch as warm wind visits
my window
outside my pane
a hundred smiles
are born from the strength
of just one vine
this life is
too brief a journey
About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Eduardo Cruz
13 years 10 months ago
Wow!
This is Taoism at its best!
a combination of a written out Haiku.
I love the way you structure this. the meter builds in a soft but strong way.
excellent!!
Eddie
PS i am a Taoist.
Candlewitch
13 years 10 months ago
Hello,
there are beautiful thoughts and sentiments here. Life lessons if one reads carefully! Very well done!!!
always, Cat