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Mar 12, 2026
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The Beating Heart Of Passion
A beating heart pounding against a golden plain
freshly mourning in morning dew .
Its widened traditional following of wistful wheat
resting with orderly ease
against the burning bastion of the buoyant sun .
Beating with the bleeding drums of this earth
awakens the forthcoming crooning
of the crystal eyed wind .
Its errant tune, torrid yet waning
whistles through the tightening entrails of dirt.
Flauntingly flowing, it tauntingly beckons
the nature’s relentless roots of
an archaic anchor , chained to a challenge .
To writhe , to rake , to rise
the farthest from the cattle
of the evergreen.
About This Poem
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - polished draft
Comments
|Edward nigma
1 month 1 week ago
The point
The meaning: How a single passion can push you past the abysmal brink of convention , birthing individuality a true sense of self seizing against this world of formative cattle. Forever raised to give in from the very beginning , soulless sutures always meant to sow themselves into the coarse burning engine of conformity. Everyone needs a voice ,a true passion pressed against the blood of this earth, so we could finally breathe fresh air ,a life sweating out the voices of our own experiences.
Geezer
1 month 1 week ago
Some...
pretty deep thoughts. Glad to see you writing again; it means a lot to see you back.
~ Geez.
|Edward nigma
1 month 1 week ago
Thanks
Thank you geezer
Geezer
1 month 1 week ago
You are very welcome...
Keep writing! ~ Geez.
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