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Become Yesterday

It feels like yesterday already,
eternal winter ambience surrounds existence
with barren trees and heavy limbs.

Memories like bonfire embers dance
tauntingly about my ghost...
beautiful sparks: offspring of hypnotic flame
threatening to set me ablaze
even as I reach out to hold on to their warmth.

But that's the past personified;
tantalizing, promises of heat and comfort
where only burning ash remain
flickering, lilting in the air
before disappearing into cold and sordid night.

I remain alone
haunted by sparkling cinders,
memories of what will become yesterday.

About This Poem

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Country/Region: USA

Favorite Poets: David Jon Martin - Author of The Chicken on My Head (a collection of poetry) and Eeedgar The Elephant Who Exaggerated (a children's poem/picture book), Frank DeF - follow him on FaceBook - Frank DeFulgentis, Henry Rollins - what is not to love about that man?, Robert Frost - a (dead) man after my own heart, Natasha Degready - follow her at AllPoetry under the name Poetic Tasha - she is always claiming writer's block, but when it comes out it is worth the wait.

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raj

14 years ago

if one is to ignore the

if one is to ignore the errors mentioned in Ian's comment...i find this write to be quite sombre which is in tune with the subject/essence of this write...i liked it..