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Feb 19, 2016
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From the beginning
From birth
I gazed at a world
through your eyes,
colours more vibrant
flowers intensely fragrant
music encompassed
my soul with joy.
Teaching from birth
and being taught,
to be your mother
loving a quartet
like no other.
Forever's of infinity
can never erase,
the infinite bond
that binds
A thousand nights
can never darken,
the bliss of a breathe
I first felt inside
When I am no more
my love will remain free,
in the stars and moons
light's in my blood line
---
I was blessed then
as I am now.
About This Poem
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - draft
Comments
alidzain
9 years 4 months ago
Jayne
This is beautiful, dear. Thanks for sharing.
Alid
Seren
9 years 4 months ago
Dear Alid
Thanks so much very happy you liked it !!
Hugs Jayne.
Rula
9 years 4 months ago
Jayne
Your words full with emotions reflect mother's love at its best
I especially liked the opening stanza.
Bless you dear.
Seren
9 years 4 months ago
Dear Rula
Thanks so much for the visit .. I am chuffed you liked it !!
Love Jayne xxx
Geezer
9 years 4 months ago
Blessed indeed...
There is no greater blessing than mother-hood. You have raised your children and now they will carry your blood line on. After we are gone, there are only the children we have brought into the world and they will carry the memories of us to their children. That way we never really die.
Higgest bugs Sis, for this one! ~ Gee
Seren
9 years 4 months ago
Dearest Bro
What can I say we are all made up of matter matter never increases or so ive read probably wrong nowdays, but I like to think that we go back and become a part of the cosmos not so much alive as in being
Thanks for the visit .. I am always happy when you like them
Love and higgliest bugs Sis xxx
lovedly
9 years 4 months ago
you haven't passed by again
how u leave
us in vain
Seren
9 years 4 months ago
Never leave in vain ..
Never leave in vain .. disappearing with what's left of life ;)
raj
9 years 4 months ago
Hi Jayne
Pure and sacred motherly love pulsates & emotes in every verse of your poem..
Much love and warm tight hugs...
Seren
9 years 4 months ago
Dear Raj
Thats a beautiful comment and its ones like yours that make me keep on keeping on
I appreciate it very much
Love and biggest hugs Jayne xxx