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Sep 04, 2020
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Believe Me
Be no disbeliever
O disbeliever
believe me
I never ever want to believe
disbelievers
why
I had died for 10 minutes
then survived
my heart beat
auto revived
believe me
all must apply your minds
a foolish guy told my mom
at 13 I would or should die
naturally
few years passed away
now till +80
I still have my way
nothing lies beyond beyond
I still say
you did not read
me friends
at least now you may
Corona passes
our way
every day
in a couple of years
will also pass away
to something else give way
it may so till then do stay
May Day may be day
any day
About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
tyro
5 years 1 month ago
I like your poem Lovedly, and
I like your poem Lovedly, and yes, I do believe you.
lovedly
5 years 1 month ago
Thanks tyro
ur also lovely
lovedly
5 years 1 month ago
You all wanna poems
or you feel its time for me to hibernate
another site thirsts for me
takes all my time mostly
say what you wish
I shall post lessly
now swim like a slower fish