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Sep 04, 2020
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Believe Me
Be no disbeliever
O disbeliever
believe me
I never ever want to believe
disbelievers
why
I had died for 10 minutes
then survived
my heart beat
auto revived
believe me
all must apply your minds
a foolish guy told my mom
at 13 I would or should die
naturally
few years passed away
now till +80
I still have my way
nothing lies beyond beyond
I still say
you did not read
me friends
at least now you may
Corona passes
our way
every day
in a couple of years
will also pass away
to something else give way
it may so till then do stay
May Day may be day
any day
About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
tyro
4 years 10 months ago
I like your poem Lovedly, and
I like your poem Lovedly, and yes, I do believe you.
lovedly
4 years 10 months ago
Thanks tyro
ur also lovely
lovedly
4 years 10 months ago
You all wanna poems
or you feel its time for me to hibernate
another site thirsts for me
takes all my time mostly
say what you wish
I shall post lessly
now swim like a slower fish