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Sep 09, 2014
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Bend down theThames POETRY REPLACED TO AVOID OPPORTUNITY LOSS
Bend down the Thames
I know the bend
down the Thames
where we met first time
and
you remember the bend
where it did end
and
we kissed
for the first time.
Tis ages past
the bends of rivers don't last
we both have walked by so fast
the end has been forgotten at last
the last time we met
twas at the end
the then permanent bend
twill be there till our end
meet me then there
before our end
dearest friend!
About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
wesley snow
10 years 10 months ago
Sorry kid.
This is too strange for my tastes.
lovedly
10 years 10 months ago
will delete
sir it
kid!