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May 19, 2011
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BERM
position
we hold
and collusion crashs
the debris shinning
and jagged
while death dances
I held what I know
and gave what
was
and the grist
chewed up the edges
and seeped
deep
like a wound
that always cries
when memories
flame
and the blaze
never dies
About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
CCfire
14 years 1 month ago
Don't change the last part of
Don't change the last part of this...I felt every word of that part.
Esker
14 years 1 month ago
Thanks CCFIRE
been around combat vets of late
either UN or otherwise
long ago was near one from Kosovo
one is never the same
and the emotional trauma
from families
dysfunction hidden like subsonic
silent but powerful
if this voice spoke we would hear
it all in Unison
Speakers and Unison
thank you
weirdelf
14 years 1 month ago
Esker, you offer no critique.
You just add another pem,
Esker
14 years 1 month ago
Pem Pem
I should do more western verse and Hiaku
Hiaku is to be read in one breath
a single exhalation
beautiful isnt it
poetry
keeps me from total madness
Thanks