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Berry

land awakens
berry blue sky
once the colour
of pellets or ore
on the warm
tracks
burgundy slag
and the oil of cresote

grasses hush dry
from winter
preserved from
another year
and season

I remember the sound
of rain arriving in
breezes and wind
hissing
whispering in its
spirit voices
cold on my forehead
collecting in my brows
and eyelashs

the dark growing darker
in the huddled tamarack
beneath the sculpted
pines

the gravel road shinning
and the bike tires
rolling over stones
to home

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: north ontario, CAN

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CCfire

CCfire

14 years 2 months ago

Another piece that just

Another piece that just brings images into your head and runs like a movie scene, you can almost smell the scents of this.

Esker

Esker

14 years 2 months ago

thought of scents didnt configure

and that you notice such detailing is a pleasure
in reading your comments

describe things for decription and never then
at this write in a rather noisy air exchanger
and others tapping away to think of smells
but yes its true how did I miss that?