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The Best of Both Worlds

Returned to welcomed awe
on night remembering
when heaven opened wide
to spill a cavelcade of joy
upon a bitter violent world,

gathered at the living tree
graced with sparkling glass,
not severed from its roots
but grasping good rich earth
within a tub of iron-banded cedar,

our children sing of saviour
cleansing sin and bringing life,
and pagan gods far older than the cross
gathering the strength of warming life
in midst of winter for the coming spring,

And you and I, in grace of cross and hammer
give thanks to those we know brought us together
melding faiths both old and new
into a trio of young voices
lifting praise and joy
into the welcoming night.

I wish you joy and peace.

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: Earth Vicinity (within a five light-year radius), ZZC

Favorite Poets: John Donne, T.S. Eliot, Serendipity, Emily Dickenson, Kailashana, Charles Bukowski, Kabir, Rett, Dalton, W. B. Yeats, William Blake, Rainer Maria Rilke, and many other Neopoet poets; Neopoet has heavily influenced my poetry and my ability to write it well.

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Comments

S

scribbler

13 years 6 months ago

hello

a very good celebratory poem.............stan

K

Kailashana2

13 years 6 months ago

Thank you, Jim.

Thank you, Jim.

I wish you joy peace and love, today yesterday and always.

~A

Race_9togo

Race_9togo

13 years 6 months ago

:)

You are most welcome, Anna.
And thank you.