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Between Us, Knowing This

Between a breath of pain
balanced on the edge of reason,
I raise my pen

~~~

I watch as hope
seeps from your eyes

knowing this,

nothing was too much
or to heavy to bare,
as waves of my suffering
overtake your sanity

know this !

your love saves me
as ripples of mortality
threaten to overtake me,
your strength lifts me
to play among the stars,
ever riding the stardust home.

knowing this

nothing is forever
except this love we share

~~~

Between this life and the next
I will await your hand
to slide into mine

About This Poem

Review Request Intensity: Please use care (this is a sensitive subject for me, do not critique harshly)

Editing Stage: Editing - draft

About the Author

Region, Country: New South Wales, Australia, AUS

Favorite Poets: Once upon a time I would have had a plethora of poets here ... there are way to many brilliant poets to name them all ... If pushed for favourites ... Pablo Neruda, P.K.Page ...

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Comments

Geezer

Geezer

14 years ago

I thought...

I recognised this one. But I can't remember if the word "bare" was supposed to be that or "bear". It works either way. Love and higgest bugs, ~ Gee

Roscoe Lane

Roscoe Lane

14 years ago

I loved this,

I loved this then and i love it now, and remember the debate and arguements about bare or bear. Love Roscoe...