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R
raj
Apr 25, 2018 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Biography [Sunku]

Simply
keep writing
your book of life

include
all seasons
bright, grey and green

imprints
shall survive
the morbid ink

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Direction: How was my language use?
How does this theme appeal to you?

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: Somewhere in the world, IND

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Comments

Rula

Rula

7 years 2 months ago

You continue to excel

at sanku form. A special last stanza
"imprints
shall survive
the morbid ink."

A pleasure to read
Keep writing dear raj

R

raj

7 years 2 months ago

Thanks Rula

for the read and encouraging comment...

warmly...

R

raj

7 years 2 months ago

Thanks Mark

for the read and kind words...more than addiction I try to write in Sunku form for a) it challenges me to express more in less words and some between the lines and b) so that this form stays active in the eyes of those who care to read even after closure of the Workshop by IRiz and Weierdelf..

Thanks again...

lovedly

lovedly

7 years 2 months ago

and dear Raj_sublime

even Iriz will envy
if not smile
you follow her footsteps
so religiously
Sunku is now
your well of creativity

R

raj

7 years 2 months ago

Thanks Eumolpus, Lovedly and IRiz

Thanks for taking time for the read ...means a lot especially when apparently I am the only one these days to post poems in this form even though few care to read....no issues...i have liked this form and shall use it as often as I can ...
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lovedly

lovedly

7 years 2 months ago

Irene is very creative

I have read her reference she posted
and glad you raj are
an emblem
of such a unique kind of poem
we will emulate too

guide
us O Lord
of sunku_ raj