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Race_9togo
Race_9togo
Jun 27, 2017 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)
This poem is part of the workshop:

IMAGERY IN POETRY( ready to start?)

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Birds (indirect imagery)

Plaintive cries of want and challenge drift through misted wood and meadow

About This Poem

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: Earth Vicinity (within a five light-year radius), ZZC

Favorite Poets: John Donne, T.S. Eliot, Serendipity, Emily Dickenson, Kailashana, Charles Bukowski, Kabir, Rett, Dalton, W. B. Yeats, William Blake, Rainer Maria Rilke, and many other Neopoet poets; Neopoet has heavily influenced my poetry and my ability to write it well.

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scribbler

8 years ago

hello!

This is pretty direct to me. Let's see what others think

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scribbler

8 years ago

yes

Sometimes indirect or unspoken imagery can be more powerful than direct imagery simply because it allows a reader to visualize things which are specific to themselves

Candlewitch

Candlewitch

8 years ago

dear Jim,

sounds like there is a duel afoot in a clearing in them thar woods! I like it!

brightest blessings.
Cat