Black Flag

Poison words
Flowing from your tongue
My name must taste good
In every song you've sung

Pull a dagger, Bitch
Then I'll pull a sword
The time has come
You're not the adored

Hide and seek
A little too late
No one likes ugly
Time to meet fate

Run, run
As fast as you can
Don't worry, I'll catch you
I'm the bitchilante hitman

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I appreciate moderate constructive criticism

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Country/Region: United States

Favorite Poets: Edgar Allan Poe, Jim Morrison

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Comments

Seren

2 years 5 months ago

Dear RoseBlack

Well I promise not to piss you off. This has venom and it's really well written. I wrote a poem called Judas Kiss it's here on the site I think. It's something like this. Well done. Your pen has a sting!!! I love it.

I can't see anything I'd change but I'm overtired I'll take another look when I come back this afternoon my time. Sun's up I've been up all night writing. It's all good I only get 3hrs sleep most nights.

Kind regards J x

P.s. I think that title is perfect.

RoseBlack

2 years 5 months ago

Thank you

For your high praise! Writing is a release for me and I think I am learning how to structure it instead of letting it all spill out. I will check out your poem for sure! Thanks again.