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Feb 11, 2017
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Black Hole Sun
Black Hole Sun
The fresh scent of dew on the morning lawn
Captivated by a smile a hush of alarm
Look up ahead into the light
Sun
Light of it's illumination
Darkened spots of dense madness
Clarity
Instant Karma amidst traveler's plight
The hope to never give up on the fight
A barbeque of the soul
Black hole sun
The carnal mind implodes
A mystery of it's vast decorum
Shelter lies dormant amidst it's beckoning plough
Alien life such as Area 51
A challenge to be free is a question of time
Sullen brevity
About This Poem
Review Request Intensity: Please use care (this is a sensitive subject for me, do not critique harshly)
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Esker
8 years 4 months ago
sounds like my summer barbeque
this one gots good oomph
thank U chevyvent
Mr Wolf!