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Jan 22, 2019
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BLACKBIRD (acrostic)
Nearly midnight he comes calling,
Evening but a memory.
Vision blurring, eyelids falling
Eventual sleep is stalking me.
Right before dreams take my night
Mild tapping wakes me from near sleep.
Outside the moon is full and bright
Ravens through my widows peep.
Ever croaking "nevermore"...
About This Poem
Style/Type: Structured: Western
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Eulekia
6 years 5 months ago
Black Bird
Dear Scribbler
I like your poem Black Bird. Send more poems in.
Eulekia
scribbler
6 years 5 months ago
Hi
I'm pleased you liked this acrostic.......stan
Ruby Lord
1 year 11 months ago
That was lovely. Nice rhyme
That was lovely. Nice rhyme and flow and an excellent example of the genre. Well done, Ruby :)
scribbler
1 year 11 months ago
Hi Ruby
I don't do many acrostics and am pleased you enjoyed one of them