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Aug 30, 2011
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the blacksmith's anvil, the lovers' bed
Pythagoras was a music critic
all things in relationship,
harmony and proportion is beauty
the universe is ordered,
sequenced and nuanced
all planets are aligned with clouds
of free thought,
in its center, we are lovers
making love
ascending
and descending, blending ripe
juices of conquest
I am Frida wild on your fingertips
sometimes the best poems are a
canvas
created from nothing,
sometimes we have
nothing to say, sometimes we break
down, lacking even the scorch of air
but sleep comes when it does
in it we are
dreamers, embracing then
moving away, you on your edge,
me on mine,
falling
suspended in mid-air, our bed is an island,
sparks fly, poke holes in the darkness.
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Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
weirdelf
13 years 10 months ago
Your imagery and spirituality
are as always superb.
Now hit me on the head with a sledgehammer. Your work needs craft.
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