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Blame Who

Blame Who

Long time there has been no storming from you
but such an outcome of growing population
and
damning economy
no one can blame,
you nor me/I
but those who produce a family
when they could afford none.
why should you or I feel blameworthy,
for all those who had
no common sense…

We till our own graves
and
none can say God was unkind to us,
for once I ask again,
where and why does
He hide from us.
No metaphors
outright truth
as all that happens …in such a manner…
is ‘cause of one’s youth,
well we all were once ourselves too… weren't you?

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Country/Region: ROU

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Ian.T

Ian.T

13 years 1 month ago

Loved

A lament about the youth and the things going wrong.I am glad that I was born into a wonderful family and used that heritage of love to address all things in my life.
Thank you my Father and Mother I hope that my days have brought a happiness to your Spirit, Yours Ian.T

Ian.T

Ian.T

13 years 1 month ago

Loved

I have tried for the past few days to sort out the picture for my profile and it just wont play the game.
Will try again another day and hope it's not the same lol. Yours, Ian.T

loved

loved

13 years 1 month ago

great

shall
wait!!!!!!
lololololol