BLEEDING INTO DARK-- rewrite

From a black and unknown space
appeared a demon face
Bleeding silver gray into dark

Once Heavens favored one
Hurled into fire and ice
Far from God’s Kingdom
His Night to discover

Eve’s serpent slides salivating
Seductions of immortality
To Soul's oblivion
Fills the human heart wiith fear
In Death's stillness

From a black and unknown space
appeared a demon face
Bleeding silver gray into dark
And in his eyes I did see
A longing and a regret
Light of Heaven's burning embers