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Aug 06, 2011
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Blood Lust
Eyes blaze in deep within the murk
fangs dripping in inhumanity,
immortal companions veiled in depravity,
draped in profanity.
Stalking their prey
with cat like precision,
sensuous seduction ,
playing with their food.
Terror stricken hearts give way
pierced jugular,
drained of dignity.
Human husks left by the way side.
victims of blood lust.
About This Poem
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Candlewitch
13 years 11 months ago
Hi Lou,
Nice to see you're still on the prowl! Good work. Nice and dark.
Stalking their prey
with cat like precision,
sensuous seduction ,
playing with their food.
always, Cat
lou
13 years 11 months ago
Cat
Thank you, lol
Love lou