Bodega Bay

The coffee maker is sounding
its’ morning music in late November.
Without mercy, always the hardest
working appliance when we are here.

A grey and overcast sea our frequent companion;
considered through rain-spattered windows
from hit-and-run squalls at first light.

The shorebirds, restless and racing
the foaming surf back and forth.
Familiar friends we will visit soon enough.

The receding surf along the shore
leaves a vivid mirror on the sand
providing time enough for reflection.

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Direction: What did you think of the rhythm or pattern or pacing?
How does this theme appeal to you?

Review Request Intensity: I appreciate moderate constructive criticism

Editing Stage: Editing - polished draft

About the Author

Region, Country: San Francisco Bay Area - USA, USA

Favorite Poets: Bukowski, Billy Collins, Ted Kooser, Haiku & Harvey Kurtzman (a visual poet, of sorts)

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Comments

Geezer

1 year 8 months ago

I had a vision...

of the crew of a fishing boat, making ready to cast off and throw the nets. Maybe not what you intended, but what I saw. Nicely done. ~ Geez.
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Michael Anthony

1 year 8 months ago

Not what I had in mind, but I

Not what I had in mind, but I can see how you can see this - I like it too. Thanks Geez!

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Tawny023

1 year 8 months ago

Absolutely Loved the

Absolutely Loved the beginning so relatable:) I m sure those that live by the sea also connect with the sea reflection and reference

Michael Anthony

1 year 8 months ago

Thank you Tawny! Our coffee

Thank you Tawny! Our coffee makers are always hard working things, regardless of location or time of year - LOL!

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Lavender

1 year 8 months ago

Hello, Michael,
I looked up images of Bodega Bay - stunning! And your poem adds a personal feeling to your surroundings. "The coffee maker is sounding its morning music in late November..." I can hear it brewing and smell the awakening fragrance! Ready to start a beautiful day.
Thank you!
L

Michael Anthony

1 year 8 months ago

Thanks L! BB is one of our

Thanks L! BB is one of our favorite places on the planet - so many great memories. Thanks, as always, for taking the time to share your thoughts.

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