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The Body as a Canvas
Ink veins running down her arms,
held together in sea side charms.
Two ladies dancing, skip over tide,
Legs akimbo, arm shaped suicide.
Snaking slowly into a necklace,
Colours run; ink holds tight her face.
Delicately seasoned butter skin,
Feather boa spreads out thin.
On shoulders, insect wings fly,
in glorious act of soaring high.
As yellow bubbles swim in tandem,
And features inked, for love’s abandon.
Flowered fingers are coded clue,
Initialled partners, she once knew.
Where life moves on, their kiss forgot,
Her famous escorts, her memories hot.
On her breast veils of spider’s silk,
Colours of lust traced to woman’s milk.
The needle inks mirror, broken glass,
And fault line marks her darkest past.
A tree of life or blue love heart,
For many, this is perfect art.
For others, source of true meaning,
and holy ones, in love of dreaming.
But where we learn what she is not,
Our painted Lady’s not from Shallot.
In her dreams, and symbols new,
She is the Lady of Tattoo.
About This Poem
Last Few Words: This is my interpretation of the Lady of Shalott, or maybe it’s a dig at Tennyson? It depends how you read it. Tennyson’s lady was confined in a tower, dreamily watching her life pass through a mirror. My lady is out in the city, inked and wearing her-story on her skin. She’s not fading into a legend, she is the legend. This is a woman claiming her space and her body and adding her visuals to her-story. Ruby xx
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Candlewitch
2 months 2 weeks ago
Dearest Ruby...
"But where we learn what she is not,
Our painted Lady’s not from Shallot.
In her dreams, and symbols new,
She is the Lady of Tattoo."
I absolutely LOVE it! Cat
Ruby Lord
2 months 2 weeks ago
Thank you for reading and
Thank you for reading and commenting Cat. I'm glad you enjoyed it. I loved writing it, a long time ago now. Take care & stay safe, Ruby xx
RoseBlack
2 months 2 weeks ago
Cannot love this enough
The concept is wonderful. There is so much stigma surrounding tattoos, especially on a woman, that we fail to see the meaning and beauty behind them. The detail casts vivid images to the reader and we get a clear picture of what the lady of tattoo looks like. We'll done.
Ruby Lord
2 months 2 weeks ago
Hi Rose, thank you for
Hi Rose, thank you for reading and commenting. I know what you mean, but I do think that women are judged by different standards all the time and I find that difficult to accept. When I was researching for this poem, the tattoos that really struck me as being amazing were the ones on women's fingers. They are mystic, their symbolism ancient, and like their owners beautiful. I appreciate your comments. A true reflection on female beauty. Ruby xx
Jokerface82
2 months 1 week ago
I love this
Great poem and imagery!
Ruby Lord
2 months 1 week ago
Hi Jokerface82, glad you
Hi Jokerface82, glad you enjoyed it. Even better you picked up on the imagery and that tells me I got it right. I appreciate your read and comment. Ruby xx
kowque
1 month 3 weeks ago
This was so visually strong
You have a way with description. Im in awe and impressed. Thank you for sharing.
Ruby Lord
1 month 3 weeks ago
Hi Kowque, thank you for
Hi Kowque, thank you for reading and commenting. Ruby xx
Leslie
1 month 1 week ago
Ruby,
I'VE BEEN THINKING ABOUT TATOO'S I WANT TO GET A FEW. AS ALWAYS YOU BLOW ME AWAY. I DON'T KNOW HOW LONG AGO YOU WROTE IT, BUT GODDAMIT IT'S GOOD PLEASE FORGIVE THE VERNACULAR , BUT IN MY OWN WAY I LOVED IT THAT MUCH! PLEASE DON'T WRITE ME OFF FOR USING COARSE WORDS. I AM JUST STILL ANGRY, BUT I MORE THAN LOVED THE POEM.