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Sep 18, 2021
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Boys Charm Not Sex
On the beach within easy reach
all were enjoying a lovely son
even he was having fun ~~boy's dilemma
this is abs imagery
a guy was simply surrounded by younger gals
wanting to buy lips sticks
perhaps negligees
this just struck my mind
what a lucky sweet guy
maybe just 17 plus
beautifuller than all gals
enjoying aroma at their expense
About This Poem
Last Few Words: Inspired By Ray
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Geezer
3 years 9 months ago
I'm thinking...
that this is about a transgender person, or cross-dresser? It leaves lots to the imagination. ~ Geez.
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lovedly
3 years 9 months ago
no GEE
He was just a shy guy
selling smaller things
cross dressing and all that
I did not see
he wore tight jeans
lovedly
3 years 8 months ago
no more
read it tis charming