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Braids
I spoke to the Universe.
"I have faith in You," I said.
"You are wise and I am oh, so small."
I nestled in grass near a wandering brook,
wanting nothing more than its sounds to hold me.
"I am the messenger," it sang. And I listened,
falling asleep as the day passed around me,
the sun, rising then disappearing. The moon, the stars,
the milky way enfolding me with virgin lace sewn from remnants
of spent tears of gods. Tears of joy and sorrow.
This is the way of the Universe - bountiful braids of joy and sorrow.
This is the nature of Tao - the Universe is my Father,
my Mother, the endless stars and the babbling brook.
The Universe spoke to me.
"I have faith in You," it whispered. "You are here with me,
nestled in this grass, sown within these heavens."
When one cries, the other tastes salt.
When one sings, the other's soul is freed.
And of that, we are one.
About This Poem
Last Few Words: We are one, universal.
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Rula
5 months ago
Dearest Lavender
I was talking to a friend this morning and oh how I wished that a few more have this same sense of humanity, the universe then will definitely be a better place to live in.
Your piece says it all, and says it perfectly!
What a heartfelt read!
Thank you for sharing!
Lavender
5 months ago
Hello, Rula,
These days bring about such turmoil, I have to remind myself of the peace and love the universe and earth hold, and the energy which connects us all.
Thank you for reading! You continue to be in my thoughts.
Lxx
Candlewitch
5 months ago
Dear Lavender
On Neopoet I am surrounded by brilliant women, of which you are one! I love this and cannot find the words to express my joy in your words.
much love, Cat xxx
Lavender
5 months ago
Hello, Cat,
I've missed you and I'm so glad to see your return! If this brought you joy, I am happy. Darn it! We all deserve love, peace, and joy.
Love,
Lxx