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Like Braille
I read your poetry
Like braille
My feelings running
over the rich texture
Of your own
My fingers running
Over the words
On the page
And there, there
I find my own heart
I know myself
And if all would say to me
I cannot know myself
Through the words of another
I could not argue
But my life,
My life has slowly righted
Like a listing ship
Tacking round
To fill its sail
About This Poem
Last Few Words: This is the first poem I am posting here.
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Direction:
What did you think of my title?
How was my language use?
What did you think of the rhythm or pattern or pacing?
How does this theme appeal to you?
How was the beginning/ending of the poem?
Is the internal logic consistent?
Review Request Intensity: I appreciate moderate constructive criticism
Editing Stage: Not actively editing
Comments
Kailashana2
14 years 6 months ago
I bid you WELCOME POET!
I bid you WELCOME POET!
Thank you for your arrival.
~A
streamoflife
14 years 6 months ago
Welcomed
Thank you Kailashana, it is nice to find this site!