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Mar 21, 2013
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Brain functionality
There is a the mind that reads one line and imagines scenes quite vividly
There is the mind that writes the line and describes events graphically
And then there is the mind that takes and changes words phonetically
And the other sort of mind that changes life theoretically
It is this sort i'd do without it plays with words heretically
It shuns the deepest function of our species
that deals with our humanity
About This Poem
Last Few Words: I think therefore I am .Who said that?
Review Request Direction:
What did you think of my title?
What did you think of the rhythm or pattern or pacing?
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
brittle light
12 years 4 months ago
Rene Descarte
Rene Descarte
don't you have google or any other search engine?
type in "I think, therfore...." and the answer will pop up befor you finish typing your question!
Instant answers are available.
Oh! this crazy, new fangled world of ours!
or was your question a rhetorical clue , or reference, to the poem?
loved
12 years 4 months ago
you ought to
now mind
your
mindality...
only then you will come to a positive
finality